The author of the reading believes that it beyond the bounds of possibility to maintain a station on Venus and provide three problems to argument his statement. The professor casts doubt on all the claims made in the article. He thinks that the idea of maintaining a station is feasible.
First of all, the author points out that spacecraft might crush apart while landing on Venus due to the hight atmospheric pressure. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that station could float like a balloon in the atmosphere instead of landing, as the pressure is much lower there, in fact, it equal to Earth's pressure level.
Secondly, the author contends that there is barely available water and oxygen sources on Venus and that humans will have to import them from Earth. The professor rebuts this argument by saying that people could use carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid to produce oxygen and water.
Finally, the author states that the clouds in Venus' atmosphere lack the sunlight, that is needed to generate electricity. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that the people can get adequate energy collecting light both from clouds that reflect it and from the sunlight that reaches the surface. So, there will be ample energy to power the station.
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- TOEFL T P O 43 Integrated Writing Task 78
- TPO-13 - Integrated Writing Task Private collectors have been selling and buying fossils, the petrified remains of ancient organisms, ever since the eighteenth century. In recent years, however, the sale of fossils, particularly of dinosaurs and other lar 60
- TPO-17 - Integrated Writing Task In the past century, the steady growth of the human population and the corresponding increase in agriculture and pesticide use have caused much harm to wildlife in the United States,birds in particular. Unfortunately for b 80
- TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is wa 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'equals'?
Suggestion: equals
...essure is much lower there, in fact, it equal to Earths pressure level. Secondly,...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'earth'.
Suggestion: Earth
... much lower there, in fact, it equal to Earths pressure level. Secondly, the autho...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, while, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93925233645 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40140091439 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5688279068 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323026819822 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100485828111 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535622873883 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172851963655 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577974306709 0.0443174109184 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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