Both listening passage and reading passage are talking about stricter rule of coal ash recycling. Reading passage is arguing that new regulations are unnecessary but the Lecturer is casting doubt about the points in reading
The listening passage lecturer argues about linear special material should not only be used for new disposal of land fllls ,companies that dispose of coal ash in disposal ponds or landfills must use liner in every new pond or landfill they build. but it has to be also used for old coal ash too.
Moreover, the professor is talking about Mercury as a dangerous material that is for fifty years safely recycled but analytics predict that with stricting the rules coal ash recycling will be unsuccessful. and if new, stricter rules are adopted for handling coal ash, consumers may become concerned that recycled coal ash products are just too dangerous, and may stop buying the products
Furthermore, reading passage is telling us that the cost is increased and the power companies will increase the cost after that at least ten percent, however the professor said it is well-worth because for implementation for 50 billion in average, it sill reduce one percent of the cost of household electricity bill .
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The listening passage lecturer argues about linear special material should not only be used for new disposal of land fllls
The listening passage lecturer argues that linear special material should not only be used for new disposal of land fllls
The listening passage lecturer argues about linear special material which should not only be used for new disposal of land fllls
Sentence: The listening passage lecturer argues about linear special material should not only be used for new disposal of land fllls ,companies that dispose of coal ash in disposal ponds or landfills must use liner in every new pond or landfill they build. but it has to be also used for old coal ash too.
Error: fllls Suggestion: ?
Sentence: Moreover, the professor is talking about Mercury as a dangerous material that is for fifty years safely recycled but analytics predict that with stricting the rules coal ash recycling will be unsuccessful. and if new, stricter rules are adopted for handling coal ash, consumers may become concerned that recycled coal ash products are just too dangerous,
Error: stricting Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: analytics Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 203 250
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 5 12
No. of Words: 203 250
No. of Characters: 1010 1200
No. of Different Words: 116 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.975 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.564 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 40.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.221 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.529 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.91 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.181 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y be used for new disposal of land fllls ,companies that dispose of coal ash in di...
^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... every new pond or landfill they build. but it has to be also used for old coal ash...
^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...oal ash recycling will be unsuccessful. and if new, stricter rules are adopted for ...
^^^
Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f the cost of household electricity bill .
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'at least', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282407407407 0.261695866417 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.203703703704 0.158904122519 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.087962962963 0.0723426182421 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462962962963 0.0435111971325 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0231481481481 0.0277247811725 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134259259259 0.128828473217 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0740740740741 0.0370669169778 200% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.63363973368 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00462962962963 0.0208969081088 22% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0694444444444 0.128158765124 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0277777777778 0.0158828679856 175% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00462962962963 0.0114777025283 40% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1237.0 1645.83664459 75% => OK
No of words: 204.0 271.125827815 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0637254902 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.04852973271 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362745098039 0.374372842146 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31862745098 0.287516216867 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205882352941 0.187439937562 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122549019608 0.113142543107 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63363973368 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.539623497131 110% => OK
Word variations: 56.7642157864 53.8517498576 105% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0529801325 38% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 40.8 21.7502111507 188% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 171.352268733 49.3711431718 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.4 132.220823453 187% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.8 21.7502111507 188% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.878197800319 273% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 72.662745098 50.5018328374 144% => OK
Elegance: 1.79661016949 1.90840788429 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.661423456302 0.549887131256 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.196600455253 0.142949733639 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0888051436491 0.0787303798458 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.743940276956 0.631733273073 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161580450729 0.139662658121 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.355321132634 0.266732575781 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136569452079 0.103435571967 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.216447657144 0.414875509568 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00498968090136 0.0530846634433 9% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.413672986826 0.40443939384 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878938609744 0.0528353158467 166% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.49668874172 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 10.2958057395 49% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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