The reading specifies that there are three main ways to prevent injuries to birds. However the lecture casts doubt on these approaches and brings up three main reasons to reject specific points made in the reading passage.
First, the author asserts that using one way glasses instead of regular glasses can help to solve the problem. On the other hand the lecture states that replacing regular glasses with one-way glasses is not useful in view of the fact that one-way glasses reflect light like the mirror, and birds are not able to understand the mirror. If the glass reflect the image of a tree, birds will fly right into the glass because birds perceive it as a real tree.
Second, based on the reading, painting colorful lines one regular window glass can be a solution to the problem. On the contrary, the lecture contradicts this idea, reasoning that colorful designs includes some unpainted areas, and birds conceive those areas as holes. So, they try to go through these holes shapes openings.
Third, the reading's last point states that magnetic field can be used to prevent birds from being injured. Nonetheless, the professor challenges this idea by explaining that birds only use the ability to sense Earth's magnetic field when they travel long distance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...main ways to prevent injuries to birds. However the lecture casts doubt on these approa...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the glass reflect the image of a tree, birds will fly right into the glass beca...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c field when they travel long distance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, third, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01408450704 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25429368604 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7990867485 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484351105913 0.272083759551 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173324090155 0.0996497079465 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102460989786 0.0662205650399 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241683442275 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136741718867 0.0443174109184 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.