The reading and the lecture both discuss eleventh century silver coin and Norse settlements. While the reading states that this coin are not genuine historical evidence and provide three reasons of support, the lecture refutes this, saying in favor of that topic and support that it is genuine.
First of all, the reading claims this coin are found far away from the sites of Norse. Norse settlement are found in near the Canada, this thousand kilometers distance reflect this coin are not related to Norse settlement. However, the lecture argues that this distance are not reflect that they are not connected with Norse settlements. Moreover, some elements are found far away from north america.
In addition, the reading makes the argument that no other coins found in canadian site, that's means Norse did not bring any silver coins with them from north american settlements. The lecture refute this point by saying that Norse have bring silver coins with them but when the travel another area the probably return back silver coin with them.
Finally, the reading passage argues that silver coins are useless to north america but it use in Europe at that time. North american don't recognized silver coin as money. The lecture refute this points by saying that silver coin are not usable that time it not right, because silver coins are attractive to business man. it will be used as nekless , jewelry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The reading and the lecture both discuss eleventh centur...
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...coin are not genuine historical evidence and provide three reasons of support, th...
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...cture argues that this distance are not reflect that they are not connected with Norse...
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...reflect that they are not connected with Norse settlements. Moreover, some elemen...
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... no other coins found in canadian site, thats means Norse did not bring any silver co...
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...north american settlements. The lecture refute this point by saying that Norse have br...
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...te this point by saying that Norse have bring silver coins with them but when the tra...
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...en the travel another area the probably return back silver coin with them. Finally, the ...
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...ins are useless to north america but it use in Europe at that time. North american ...
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...nized silver coin as money. The lecture refute this points by saying that silver coin ...
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...business man. it will be used as nekless , jewelry.
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.... it will be used as nekless , jewelry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, moreover, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0085106383 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16290628609 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506382978723 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9165971062 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0833333333 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.517195745144 0.272083759551 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216175877292 0.0996497079465 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102698499247 0.0662205650399 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330317270788 0.162205337803 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875506312569 0.0443174109184 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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