When it comes to the topic of managing universities’ budgets, people tend to develop various viewpoints. Most of them generally adopts the idea that schools and universities, in order to sharpen student skills and knowledge, should pay more attention on faculty system. On the other hand, a few others believes that school should invest in infrastructure and physical plant because it is more important. Personally, I find myself at the same place with the second notion for the following reasons.
First and foremost, along with the expansion of global warming and other environmental issues, the living condition for people is not as safety as in the past. To solve this problem, humans created high technology to protect them physically and biologically. For example, we have air condition to balance the heat, protecting us from getting too hot or too cold. By keeping the temperature around us constantly, air condition allows humans to avoid the environment isuesses. On the contrary, the faculty members are also uses the universities’ substructure like students, this means not only they find the solution to avoid the global issues, but also they cannot protect their students from these. As a result, to give students a healthy studying environment, universities should focus on infrastructure. To be more specific, they should invest on modern machines to protect student from population.
Furthermore, using modern technology enable students to study more efficiently. In fact, with the support of technology, student can acquire the lesson faster. To be more clearly, let take a chemical class as an example to illstatrade this. The professor in this class wanted to explain the chemical reaction for the student, but the molecules were too small to be seen by eyes. However, the professor used a screen that had a video describe the reaction; indeed, it was not hard for his students to understand because the video was very detail. What can be clear to see from this example is technology enable student to study better so universities should develop their substructure. In contrast, not every faculty worker can manage this, so invest on them is a big waste of financial fund.
In brief, in order to create a healthy and effective environment for students, it is more important for university to invest on infrastructure than on faculty satisfied. In order to maintain the studying qualities, modern technology is the strongest weapon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, for example, in brief, in contrast, in fact, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1373.03311258 151% => OK
No of words: 396.0 270.72406181 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24494949495 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02414673472 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 145.348785872 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 419.366225166 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 2.5761589404 582% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1883162761 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.85 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135370059782 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421222905397 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287695870196 0.0662205650399 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796797479131 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249421255924 0.0443174109184 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 63.6247240618 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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