Recently, there has been a debate about whether or not the paying of high taxes for purchasing cigarettes and unhealthy products are useful. The author thinks that rising taxes have some social benefits, whereas the lecturer believes that the arguments about the benefits can be challenged. Both the author and the professor provide their ideas to support their points which I will discuss below.
First, the writer states that raising taxes on cigarettes leads smokers to buy less, and smoking decreased as taxes on tobacco increased. He adds more by saying that will help to make a healthier community. He expects that imposing similar taxes on unhealthy products like food and beverages would decrease obesity. On the other hand, the professor challenges this point. He states that lead to unhealthy behavior because smokers might buy the low quality of cigarettes consequently more harmful. He explains more his idea by saying that, the people's behavior would be the same for other unhealthy products.
Secondly, the article claims that It is fair financially for others who not involved in unhealthy behavior. He elaborates more his idea by saying that when the smoker gets sick that increase the medical costs which unfair for others who no involved in bad behavior. The professor contradicts this point. He states that, although it might be fair for those who involved in an unhealthy situation, it does not take into account the personal income. He gives example to support his idea mentioning the high and low-income smokers both are an addict to cigarettes, and it is unfair for the low-income person to pay the same taxes as the high-income one.
Finally, The author mentions the high rate of taxation help the government to provide more benefits for the public like building stadiums, parks, and support education. The mentor defeats this claim. He states that can have a downside, The government can depend on the taxes revenue only. He elaborates more and says the government should find another way to overcome unhealthy behaviors such as banning smoking in parks or in public or indoor and outdoor.
Conclusion, the passage, and the lecture are both about the high taxes on unhealthy products lead social benefits. Both are contradicted each by providing their ideas and examples.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...Recently, there has been a debate about whether or not the paying of high taxes for purchasing...
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Line 6, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e explains more his idea by saying that, the peoples behavior would be the same f...
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Line 6, column 545, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ains more his idea by saying that, the peoples behavior would be the same for other un...
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Line 10, column 238, Rule ID: NOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...dical costs which unfair for others who no involved in bad behavior. The professor...
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Line 14, column 270, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'taxes'' or 'tax's', 'taxis's'?
Suggestion: taxes'; tax's; taxis's
...nside, The government can depend on the taxes revenue only. He elaborates more and sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1373.03311258 143% => OK
No of words: 376.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20478723404 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56788629164 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492021276596 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 419.366225166 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.980106714 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.85 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 4.45695364238 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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