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Both the reading and the lecture talk about ''tarreya taxifoha''. The article states that the tarreya taxifoha is decreasing its population and might dissapear completely from earth. The article provides some alternatives that might help aliviate the tarreya taxifoha situation, such as reestablishing the tree on the same location, to move the tree to a new location, and to preserve the trees on reserch centers. The speaker refutes these alternatives explained in the article and she explains why they they won't work.

First of all, the article states that to reestablish the tree in the same location might help aliviate the problem. In contrast, the speaker disagrees and states that reestablishing is not a good option because the weather on large region is changing due to the global warming, because of this the small area, where these trees grow, might also be affected by this change. Even, there are large regions around the world that are becoming drier.

Second, the article states that moving to a new area where similar conditions might be found could solve the problem. On the other hand, the speaker claims that relocation has a lot of problems. For example, trees such as the black loquestra has been taken to other regions, and these trees have destroy the original inhabitants of the new region because they spread very quit. So, relocation has unpredicted outcomes.

Finally, the article states that to preserve the taxifoha on research center might help to solve the problem. On the contrary, the speaker says that tarreya trees, are only resistent when they are in the wild, after been moved to a preserve location they do not have strong resistent to resist diseases

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Sentence: The speaker refutes these alternatives explained in the article and she explains why they they won't work.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to they and they

Sentence: Both the reading and the lecture talk about ''tarreya taxifoha''. The article states that the tarreya taxifoha is decreasing its population and might dissapear completely from earth.
Error: dissapear Suggestion: disappear

Sentence: The article provides some alternatives that might help aliviate the tarreya taxifoha situation, such as reestablishing the tree on the same location, to move the tree to a new location, and to preserve the trees on reserch centers.
Error: reserch Suggestion: research
Error: aliviate Suggestion: ?

Sentence: First of all, the article states that to reestablish the tree in the same location might help aliviate the problem.
Error: aliviate Suggestion: ?

Sentence: On the contrary, the speaker says that tarreya trees, are only resistent when they are in the wild, after been moved to a preserve location they do not have strong resistent to resist diseases
Error: resistent Suggestion: No alternate word

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Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 281 250
No. of Characters: 1377 1200
No. of Different Words: 137 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.094 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.9 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.45 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.026 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4