TPO29 integrated
The reading passage and lecture have a conflicting opinion on whether or not many dinosaurs survived thanks to migration to the courteous area. The article strongly postulates that in North Slope winter lasted many months and it was hard to sustain in this burden so they could possible to migrate to another sphere. The listening adamantly delineates that the author's points are not persuasive because of several compelling reasons.
First and foremost, according to the author of the excerpt that the dinosaur's migration assumption is correspondent with the edmontosaur's diet habit because they were herbivorous and in the wintertime, they hadn't any vegetation to eat so it leads them to relocate to another steady zone area. The professor offsets these points by declaring that actually, those animals didn't have to move into another realm because the temperature of that time might be warmer than today, more importantly, in the Arctic zone of winter has plenty of dead plants which could enough to digest those animals.
On top of this, the professor in the lecture elaborates by bringing up the point that living as the herd is not just the only reason why they migrated but it meant they needed to extra protection. Moreover, the yak horde which mostly lives in Western stay in one place during their entire life. these points refute the author's indications about the edmontosaur's skeletons discovered from the identical site also it encourages the belief that they lived in the flock so it leads them to migrate.
The text lastly insists that the edmontosaur' species were bodily capable of migrating in long-lasting ways because they were so fast and it enabled them to warm themselves in a long journey. The speaker in the lecture counter these implications by asserting that if young members of the species couldn't able to migrate in long travels, thus the adult couldn't abandon them in a harsh climate because they juveniles couldn't overcome it so they had to stay in where they were.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...d lecture have a conflicting opinion on whether or not many dinosaurs survived thanks to migra...
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Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... possible to migrate to another sphere. The listening adamantly delineates that the...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dinosaurs'' or 'dinosaur's'?
Suggestion: dinosaurs'; dinosaur's
...g to the author of the excerpt that the dinosaurs migration assumption is correspondent w...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...herbivorous and in the wintertime, they hadnt any vegetation to eat so it leads them ...
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Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... declaring that actually, those animals didnt have to move into another realm because...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... in one place during their entire life. these points refute the authors indications a...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ng that if young members of the species couldnt able to migrate in long travels, thus t...
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Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...migrate in long travels, thus the adult couldnt abandon them in a harsh climate because...
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Line 4, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... a harsh climate because they juveniles couldnt overcome it so they had to stay in wher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02108433735 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61540673192 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9632989193 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.7 110.228320801 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 21.698381199 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25585090811 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101793167363 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403369639655 0.0662205650399 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158129392762 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344578125887 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.3589403974 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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