TPO48
The reading and listening passage have conflicting opinions about methods to solve the problem of decreasing frog population. The author of the reading suggests three ways to solve this problem. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article and brings up three reasons to support it. she thinks what the author offers is not practical solutions.
The first point the author makes is that, pesticides are a threat for frogs. It is mentioned that if the law doesn't allow farmers to use harmful pesticides near frog populations, it would reduce the harmful effect of them on the frogs. The lecturer opposes this point by explaining that this suggestion is not economical and fair for farmers. Furthermore, she argues that if the farmers don't 'use pesticides, they will lose more crops.
Secondly, the author contends that fungus is one major factor in declining frog population. the author notes that by preventing infection in large scale the frog population would be protected. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that treating individuals each frog in large scale is not practical. Besides, due to the prevention doesn't pass on offsprings, it should be done on each generation, thereby, it is really expensive and complicated.
Finally, the author states that many of the frog habitats are threatened by excessive water use by human. The article argues that, many frog species would recover from excessive water use will be prevented. This concept is refused by the lecturer with asserts that the real reasons for this is global warming. she believes that global warming contribute in frog population decline.
In conclusion, the lecturer and the author appear to be in disagreement about how to solve the problem of declining frog species. the author offers three solutions which are contradicted by the lecturer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gests three ways to solve this problem. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or offers is not practical solutions. The first point the author makes is that, p...
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... frogs. It is mentioned that if the law doesnt allow farmers to use harmful pesticides...
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Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sticides near frog populations, it would reduce the harmful effect of them on the...
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Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...farmers. Furthermore, she argues that if the farmers dont use pesticides, they wi...
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Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ermore, she argues that if the farmers dont use pesticides, they will lose more cro...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...or factor in declining frog population. the author notes that by preventing infecti...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...actical. Besides, due to the prevention doesnt pass on offsprings, it should be done o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...eal reasons for this is global warming. she believes that global warming contribute...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... the problem of declining frog species. the author offers three solutions which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15333333333 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7099733496 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.947715711 49.2860985944 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 4.45695364238 269% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376814753603 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118481496609 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105745733756 0.0662205650399 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200258174114 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956904153765 0.0443174109184 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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