TPO49
The author points out to some pieces of evidence to indicate that the humpback whales migrate using stars. The lecturer, however, refutes the aforementioned claim and offers some counterclaims to show the arguments are not compelling.
First, according to the reading, there is an indication of high intelligence in whales due to the fact that their brain is more complex rather than many other animals. Nevertheless, the professor casts doubt on the statement since he believes that there is not any connection between whales' migration and their developed mind. He argues that some birds also possess this level of cognition, but it is not very high. In fact an average ability that they born with.
Second, the reading asserts that the special movement of humpback whales, moving in a straight line, is most probably as a result of utilizing external objects like stars. On the contrary, the speaker rules out the possibility by mentioning other explanation for this phenomenon. He thinks that the movement can be due to external forces like earth gravity. For instance, some animals have a distinctive feature in their body which is sensitive to magnet. Therefore, this biomagnetit contributes to a well orientation.
Finally, based on the author's perspective, humpback whales show an unusual behavior, knows as spy-hopping, in which they float on the water and look at sky. Using sky for migration can be regarded as a reasoning for this behavior. Conversely, the lecturer rules out the probability due to the fact that other animals such as shark exhibit this behavior. As a matter of fact, sharks do not migrate. In addition, they place their head out of water during day, and consequently, it is implausible that it can be consider as looking as stars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...h. In fact an average ability that they born with. Second, the reading asserts t...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pback whales, moving in a straight line, is most probably as a result of utilizin...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...l orientation. Finally, based on the authors perspective, humpback whales show an un...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, finally, first, however, look, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10689655172 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84180822005 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.965639184 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5625 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8125 7.06452816374 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391626263837 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10963237488 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740328683215 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212230608713 0.162205337803 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630587134257 0.0443174109184 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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