In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent)of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.
The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring morestaff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company profits. For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rates. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate.
Finally, the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests, or enjoying leisure activities.
In the article, the writer suggests that the company should hire more four days per week worker than five days per week workers. The writer provides information that as the four-day workers won't mind by paying less and it is beneficial for the company. As the four-day workers get the rest more the writer believes that they would make fewer errors. The writer also believed that the company uses them by making them do the same amount of work by only paying 80 percent of the payment. But the orator argues that by recruiting more for day workers the reputation of a company could be destroyed, as they have to hire more employee. The orator also argues that by recruiting more four day workers are not beneficial for the company as the company train more employee and provide more health policy to all of them, thus that could be a loss for the company.
The orator also argued that it is a quixotic idea by thinking for day workers could compete five-day workers as in less payment the workers have to overtime to complete the work. The writer also said that there would be more employment by recruiting more four day workers, as workload distributed to other workers and company forced to hire more workers for remaining works. The orator provides his argument that by recruiting more four-day workers company need to expand their space and have to provide more computers and that could be the loss for the company. The orator also argued that as the four-day workers have more time they would like to practice avocation for the reaming week.
The writer believed that four-day workers use their money better as they have much more quality time to spend with their family and towards their personal interest. The orator argued that as the four days workers paid less they have less money to spend and they have less stability in their job. The orator also argued that the four-day workers lose their job more quickly than five-day workers in the economic recession and in case of promotion, as five-day workers get quicker promotion as they work more than four-day workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and it is beneficial for the company. As the four-day workers get the rest more ...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have to overtime to complete the work. The writer also said that there would be mo...
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Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hire more workers for remaining works. The orator provides his argument that by re...
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Line 2, column 564, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...that could be the loss for the company. The orator also argued that as the four-day...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...actice avocation for the reaming week. The writer believed that four-day workers u...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly and towards their personal interest. The orator argued that as the four days wor...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they have less stability in their job. The orator also argued that the four-day wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 362.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75138121547 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20405291951 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.375690607735 0.540411800872 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1581194307 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.307692308 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 7.06452816374 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267102856187 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142456106066 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050224147459 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222755392624 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291277349947 0.0443174109184 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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