Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate about the living benefits in the cities and country side areas and problems that people face by living in rural areas, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It can be said that the city life is much better than rural areas. This essay will further elaborate on why the cities are better for accomodation and less problematic than rural areas.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits of living in the cities but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it offers easy access to the transport and the educational services that can reduce the worry of delying from the work and staying uneducated. Another benefit can be associated with the other services like as, hospitals and jobs that are not easily accessible in rural areas.
There are several problems associated with rural areas and the first and foremost is the lack of the job oppertunities. People want to work to make their living better by earning and in villages there are no big companies that can give work to the habitats. Other problems are related to the education and hospital services. Thereby, people want to move to the cities to stay healthy and educated. To solve all these problems government can take positive actions.
In the view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the cities are more convenient place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47665820962 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542016806723 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2116850415 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 7.25397266985 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277672491641 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102872929351 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619445828128 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154415665355 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596907315162 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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