1. What ways do you suggest to encourage the usage of public transport among the people?
There are many advantages of travelling using public vehicles. This essay will suggest the ways of encouraging people to use public vehicles.
First of all, the government should launch awareness campaign. It is utmost necessary to aware the people about the benefits of using public transportation system. Using public transportation system yields numerous positive effects: decrease of traffic congestion, reduces the production of carbon foot print, allows commuters to walk up to bus stop and vice-versa. According to publictransport.com, with the increase of 52 % commuters in metro train, traffic jam period has been decreased by 47% and the record of carbon-dioxide showed fall in the curve in comparison to last year.
Next crucial step is, the state must impose huge tax in private vehicles. Imposing high tax in private vehicles will force public to use cheap public transportation system. In addition, the government should simultaneously improve the facilities in public vehicles like free wifi, enough number of buses, decreasing the fare of travel, etc. Rajan state of Japan was able to increase the public commuters by
45% simply by imposing huge tax in private vehicle despite other facilities in public transportation system remained same.
In a nutshell, the government should focus mainly in awareness to people about the win- win effects of using public transport as well as should demotivate using of private vehicles by imposing high tax.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 20.9802955665 10% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46052631579 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02766557495 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0622266852 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191522074152 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895972871186 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892121754407 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123391991145 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060873858531 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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