In these days, it is an irrefutable fact that multiculturalism is found in every country, no matter whether it is western or eastern country. Many people argue that the ability to learn more than one language will be less important in future, but I strongly disagree with the statement; let me elaborate on my explanation.
Primarily, due to the higher demand for certain occupancies, people migrate to countries with or without their families. Also it is an undisputable fact that English is more commonly spoken language in the world, but due to the growth of new communities, other languages such as Chinese, Hindi, Arabic are becoming popular. Having the change to converse people in few different languages are an absolute plus; however, it is relatively hard to learn more than one language. According to an academic journal published by The Harvard University, it is revealed that ability to speak more than one language will boost a candidate’s chance of securing a job soon.
Secondly, people who argue for the opposite may argue due to the advancement of technology and lifestyles people may get use to stick with a universal language, but I highly doubt it considering literacy rate and learning curve of different people.
Finally, both sides have strong facts to support the argument, but in my opinion I still believe that learning more than one language will not be less important in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...han one language will be less important in future, but I strongly disagree with the state...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt; let me elaborate on my explanation. Primarily, due to the higher demand for ...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...untries with or without their families. Also it is an undisputable fact that English...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...echnology and lifestyles people may get use to stick with a universal language, but...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to curve'
Suggestion: to curve
... considering literacy rate and learning curve of different people. Finally, both ...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...one language will not be less important in future.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e will not be less important in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0811965812 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90952838014 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3846141481 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.625 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378148540511 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170816342885 0.0925447433944 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171518544173 0.071462118173 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24351421104 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141562555917 0.0609392437508 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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