ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF CASHLESS SOCIETY.

Recently, the phenomenon of cashless society and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of card payment services is highly beneficial. Such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined the believe that electronic banking can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.

From a social standpoint, the advantages of the cashless transaction can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of the international banking system, as well as credit card debt, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment with discovered real financial difficulties. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both a bank note and a bank card apparently can be seen.

Within the realm of science, disadvantages of the cashless transaction might increase the consequences of a charge card. Moreover, the fundamental aspect of paper money could relate to this reality that the demerits of bank card pertain to bank notes. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of the electronic transaction is correlated negatively with the physical transaction of bank notes. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of people uses more credit cards.

To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of cashless transaction far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of using more credit cards prove the significance of electronic banking, but also pinpoint bank note implications.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of ca...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...al number of individuals. I am inclined the believe that electronic banking can be a plus, ...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...umber of individuals. I am inclined the believe that electronic banking can be a plus, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48363636364 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20780865446 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8170112944 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119415826374 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402871483591 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575698806469 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717992019533 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224189831295 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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