The belching and unauthorized behaviour is unacceptable in modern offices. How far you support this view? Give your response with justification.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that belching and other unauthorized behaviors are banned in modern work places. In my opinion, this statement is realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important features of this statement before deducing any conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of argument discussing the fact that at office premises, certain uncomfortable behaviors are unacceptable. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that in this contemporary world, modern organizations and other well known companies are competing with each other and everyone wants to set the company’s name on top of the list. Therefore, rules are being set to run a company in order to avoid any unusual situations. As a prime example, a famous fast food brand Burger king has set a rule that employees are not allowed to burp or behave rudely with customers or other employees, and they should punish of these acts.
Another, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that belching and other impulsive behaviors of workers ruin that peaceful environment of company or organization and this would ulimetely effects overall production of that organization.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that belching and other unacceptable behaviors from employees effects the working environment of the office and these should not be acceptable by any organization. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lieve. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important features of this statement be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39094650206 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02924826803 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2856904762 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118235750827 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449240129901 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344115042282 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757887239723 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313586537195 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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