In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
There is a radical change in each and every field due to rapid advancement in technology. In a cashless society, people should opt for cashless transactions or not has created a chaos in the country. Some people believe that it’s effectual for the society while some are opposing it. In this essay, I am going to deliver both sides before jumping to the conclusion.
There are myriad benefits of performing cashless transactions. To begin with the positive side, we can pay our sundry bills, purchase and subscribe to various services in minimal time as a result, there is a massive saving in the time. Moreover, due to the increase in the online mode, job openings also increases in the respective field simultaneously. For example, as per the recent survey by the technology experts, there is a substantial hike in the customer support Field due to increasing usage of technological services.
Nonetheless, there are also ramifications co-exist with the above bright sides. Firstly, users of the technology are always under the fear of spams and hacking. While doing cashless transactions. Secondly, in the many of the instance, people are unaware of the hidden charges deducted through the service provider.
To sum up, the aforementioned points, I strongly believe that, undoubtedly, enhancing technological development is a boon for today’s era but one must be enough watchful while putting into the practice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ntioned points, I strongly believe that, undoubtedly, enhancing technological dev...
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...tchful while putting into the practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26200873362 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05548319825 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637554585153 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3994731951 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6923076923 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096434232367 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037210006898 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543332229071 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543684927082 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556654563155 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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