In this days, introducing different discount and offers to costumers has become a common marketing strategy for big companies.These strategies have positive impacts on their thriving trend and reputation. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze some of the impacts.
To begin with, there are various reasons to recommend all companies to this marketing strategy. At first, although using a discount for products decreases the profits, the firms attract more purchaser for their products. the people like different offers such as selling a product with one extra at the same price. For example, a washing liquid company in Iran gathered many customers of other companies by using diverse offers on its products.
In addition, this kind of marketing strategy may be negative and increase the costs. But it can be profitable in the future. By this strategy, the companies can introduce their new products and low-selling products. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MTR University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of reputed companies represent a new free extra product with any purchase from the customers to test it.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that using various offers as well as discounts can help to large companies to develop their business and enhance their reputation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33936651584 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86929210181 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4490750442 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3636363636 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277111563559 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996602651732 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811423870108 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171596395362 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784658719236 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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