Communication has evolved significantly in the last decade. Discuss pros and cons impacts.
Communication is one of the major fields which has been developed significantly within past few decades. With the development of the technology, communication methods are now becoming an essential part our day today lives. This essay will elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of these communication ways.
To begin with, few decades ago it was very difficult for us to communicate with each other. Before the inventions of the telephone, computer and internet, it took more than weeks to send a message even it was emergency. The development of the communication, keep the people close to each other. For example, earlier if we were on a trip, it was hard for us to inform things to home. Hence, parents were in a doubt whether we were arrived safely or not. But now because of the mobile phones parents can keep in touch with their children easily. Furthermore, now the communication system is very much cheaper. We ca communicate with the people who lived in far way countries in minute with the lowest cost using Viber, Whatsapp or messenger. Moreover, social medias give the opportunity of recognizing people in different cultures as well as different attitudes.
In contrast, improvements in communication fields have their own disadvantages as well. Firstly, because of the social medias most of the people missed their loved ones. They are busy with chatting people whom they didn't see even each other, but they don't have time to spend with their family. On the other hand, students are wasting their valuable time on social medias. Children are addicted on virtual computer games, so that they don't like to play in outside. This will badly affect their physical and mental health.
To conclude, based on above mentioned factors i think that the development in communication fields has more merits than cons.
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| 2019-05-06 | Deepika Naresh Rohra | 75 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'can'?
Suggestion: can
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Message: The proper name in singular (ca) must be used with a third-person verb: 'communicates'.
Suggestion: communicates
...tion system is very much cheaper. We ca communicate with the people who lived in far way co...
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Suggestion: didn't
...are busy with chatting people whom they didnt see even each other, but they dont have...
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Suggestion: don't
...hey didnt see even each other, but they dont have time to spend with their family. ...
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Suggestion: don't
...on virtual computer games, so that they dont like to play in outside. This will badl...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in contrast, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.073089701 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83742714702 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4887783651 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3684210526 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737059163234 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248074375619 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319494757772 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548303176309 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364215605629 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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