People's opinions differe as to to whether or not company's top level authorities should take employees suggestions or ideas to make any decisions. While there's are some strong arguments againt this setting, I strongly believe that top level authorities should accept the lower level employee's suggestions.
Top level employees must take suggestions and ideas from their low level employees to make the company better place. Because some time the ideas from the low level workers is more significant than the suggestion from a top level employee. For instance, there is a book on the desk which can help the low level employees.
Moreover, peace can be maintained when lower level employees suggestions heard by the top level managers. These days, its common that peace within the company is not maintained due to the differences between the employees. For example, an Australian company have rule in their organization to listen to all their employees to maintain peace within the company. Thus, it helps the company a peaceful place.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how a company can be made a better and peaceful place when the managers take ideas from their team-mates. In my opinion, top level authorities should take lower level employee's suggestions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oyees to make the company better place. Because some time the ideas from the low level ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25615763547 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75083348462 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9638225251 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510893716207 0.242375264174 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216197532605 0.0925447433944 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189414923483 0.071462118173 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346598162118 0.151781067708 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151555166765 0.0609392437508 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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