Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate (eliminate) this?
The cultural setback is causing a panic in the minds of migrants when they reach the new country and witness stark differences in the lifestyles of people in the new nation, like a new language, food habits, diverse laws, unfamiliar customs, and religion. These hurdles can be overcome in different ways. In my opinion, flexibility and adaptability with proper preparation and respecting the laws and customs of the land will help the immigrants to settle down fast in the new land.
Firstly, some of the ways for immersion (= involvement) are to learn the local language, new culture, customs, climate, food habits, and laws. It is commonly said that when in Rome be like a Roman. To illustrate this many immigrant from the Asian countries migrates to developed countries like Canada, the U.S. They focus on their purpose and are not perturbed (disturbed) by anything else. Apart from that, the receiving country can also take some efforts to be more patient while the newly arrived are still going through the involvement process.
Secondly, it is essential to respect new culture and diversity. The newcomers should immediately understand and follow the law of the land in order to keep themselves away from any trouble. Once a person accepts that there is a difference and acknowledges it, then the process of integration becomes easy. Therefore, a mutual respect must be maintained among the immigrants and the natives.
To sum up, it can be said that the best way to overcome cultural shock is to start learning about the new culture before moving there. By acknowledging the differences and respecting the diversity, one can ease off the cultural shock to a great extent. Hence, small steps can be beneficial in cultural integration and protect against cultural shock.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...le down fast in the new land. Firstly, some of the ways for immersion = involvement are to...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun immigrant seems to be countable; consider using: 'many immigrants'.
Suggestion: many immigrants
...ome be like a Roman. To illustrate this many immigrant from the Asian countries migrates to de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, while, apart from, in my opinion, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06825938567 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75836080056 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1991293188 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129070832934 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456514455709 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477828050655 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786356245566 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447092678138 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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