There is no escape from the fact that dangerous activities such as extreme skiing are becoming popular among people, especially the yougth. Although some critics may assert that these activities increase the risk of physical damage to an individual, in my opinion, if approached properly, they could also be beneficial.
To begin with, extreme sports are advised by a myriad of psychologists as a cure for a great deal of mental problems. These psychologists are of the opinion that such activities cause a chain of chemical reactions in our body which is so helpful for an individual to purge his thoughts after being through a stressful situation. They ask their patients who are suffering from diseases such as depression to expose themselves in such dangerous situations to forget about their own predicaments.
Moreover, these types of sports are expected to help make our body more strong. As our heart beat starts to increase and our body starts to burn a great amount of colostrol, our muscles would become more powerful, and such phenomenon would decrease the possibility of cardiovascular diseases during our lifetime.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that such activities would be beneficial for our health; however, they must be done with constant care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23902439024 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91365326897 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4998319889 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687632168802 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353885998908 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355179514947 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462653349908 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361874500156 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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