In developing countries, tourism has advantages and disadvantages.
In recent decades, tourism have emerged as one the leading sector especially for developing or underdeveloped countries. While some people believe that tourism have an adverse affect on local population. In this essay, I shall be elaborating my viewpoint by discussing advantages and disadvantages.
At the outset, tourism provide boost to GDP and country growth as it generates job opportunities for all age groups. Nowadays, tourist prefer to stay in a comfortable and luxurious hotel, good transport system and and need entertainment. This result in job creation for those who are not educated well. In this world, there are few countries who are completely dependent on tourism as there is exchange of foreign money.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages while visiting places which are old and heritage as tourists tend to make them dirty by drinking alcohol, cigarette and throwing plastics. This leads to environmental pollution. Moreover, there is culture difference between local people and tourists due to which locals are impacted by tourists. In my view, tourism plays a vital role in country's growth but government should develop infrastructure to keep places clean and attractive.
In conclusion, the advantage of tourism in developing countries outweigh disadvantages as it plays an important role in overall country growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08230264075 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9218393667 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8333333333 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264914058111 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799685336251 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843752764444 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167155632466 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110398037147 0.0609392437508 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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