Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree.

Essay topics:

Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree.

Votes
Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2019-12-30 Maheswari 77 view
Essay Categories
Essays by user Maheswari :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... massive usage of fossil fuel, increased population and destruction of forest.In ...
^^
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...d population and destruction of forest.In my opinion, these problems are rectifie...
^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
... their effort to minimize the pollution.Firstly,people can use public transport instead...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...effort to minimize the pollution.Firstly,people can use public transport instead of pri...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...e vehicles. For example, Electric train is best option to people who commute to office....
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... option to people who commute to office.Secondly,people can use electronic message syste...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...to people who commute to office.Secondly,people can use electronic message system such ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...il, Facebook, Twitter to replace papers.As a result, deforestation will be decreas...
^^
Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Government
...ecreased. Adding further to reasons,Government can enforce strict norms and rules to m...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ules to make the environment real green.It has to spend more proportion of amount ...
^^
Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
...in national budget for public transport.Consequently,less usage of cars would decrease the u...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , less
...budget for public transport.Consequently,less usage of cars would decrease the usage ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...f cars would decrease the usage of fuel.Secondly, campaign awareness programs will educa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...will educate the people about ego-green.I would like to cite an example of GO-gre...
^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...n public places. To recapitulate,there are myriad factors are intended in envi...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ue is in individual and government hand.Hence both of them should forward their best ...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 144, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ue is in individual and government hand.Hence both of them should forward their best ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89243795129 2.71678728327 143% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675126903553 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.551516969 50.4703680194 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.0 104.977214359 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 20.9669160288 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.25397266985 324% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144473983276 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614207018125 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317393590955 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796196731732 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118279797054 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 12.6369458128 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 53.1260098522 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.11 11.5310837438 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.