The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?

Recently, the phenomenon of environmental issues and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the efforts of people are highly beneficial, governmental legislation regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the help from the government can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the government should be responsible for solving the environmental problems. At first, people have an important role to reduce the environmental problems by using the public transportation. However, the government can legislate the rules to force people to use public transportation such as traveling by bus or train to reduce air pollution.
In addition, the rivers' water is endangered by the swage of factories in every point of the world. The governments should make rules to force the owners of factories to short their hands in natural sources. For instance, a research scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that a significant number of creatures in rivers or disappearing due to humans activities and pollutions in river waters.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on the responsibility for solving the environmental problems, I profoundly believe that besides the individual efforts the governments have the major role to solve this problem.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50655021834 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3114605625 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7938520718 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143961796748 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534787312165 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752477064143 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872418920346 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572411506264 0.0609392437508 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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