The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
In this contemporary world people are moving towards their destiny without worrying about the environment. There are Many factors which prone the environment. people should aware about this. Now a days we are facing lots of environmental variations like climate change, global warming, calamities etc. because of globalization. I will explain it in the following paragraphs.
Reason for the pollution is like urbanization, factories, acid rain etc. these are all happening due to human activities. Government should create awareness about the environment among the people to curtail the pollution. Because they are responsible for protecting the people and also minimize the factories in the city limit. For example, Tamilnadu government banned the plastic usages as well as production in order to save the environment from the plastic.
Moreover, many NGOs and people also works against the pollution and creates many remedies against the pollution like tree planting, rain water harvesting etc. for example, in china one NGO built a oxygen tower in the middle of the city. It generates tons of oxygen per hour in order to reduce the inhaling diseases.
According to my glimpses, saving our environment from the pollution is depending on the individuals. No need of blaming the government or NGOs. As a citizen of a country you should come first and initiate to curtail the things which is prone our ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...save the environment from the plastic. Moreover, many NGOs and people also work...
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...s against the pollution and creates many remedies against the pollution like tree...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29777777778 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89484514181 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604444444444 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5400554236 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972616955914 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303590301486 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268636418096 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552376459758 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436765893812 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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