Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays, extreme sports have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "should they be banned?" Although some people think such sports should not be allowed, I tend to believe that they are advantageous.
From an economic point of view, risky sports are indeed bound up tightly with economic growth, which it might lead to both the attraction of spectators and influx of international currency. For example, a group of profound economists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between economic growth and financial achievements as well as the number of keen sportsmen and sportswomen. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that hazardous sports are correlated positively with not only money but also economic issues.
In medical terms, dangerous sports such as skiing and rafting are attributable to healthy athletes, in that it would lead to the reduction of depression rate, being fit, and building self-confidence. A well-known example of such attributions is recreational activities, which are cause for concern since they had been mistaken to take such events for granted. Had they provided athletes with entertainment, they might have had the opportunity to entertain people. Thus, risk-taking sports could play a significant role in keeping persons healthy.
To recapitulate, I entirely disagree with banning extreme sports. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to strict some legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Nowadays, extreme sports have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.644 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17924519344 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1860576761 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.1 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137299986178 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508436759275 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603558343916 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839864796358 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605845405282 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 12.6369458128 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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