In a modern lifestyle, eating of junk food has risen tremendously in people especially children and adults. While it is possible to claim that it is the quick, convenient and inexpensive way to feed stomach in the busy time schedule. On the contrary, it is very harmful to our healthy life. My view is that harmful effect outweighs advantageous side. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view on both sides of arguments.
There are myriad reasons why junk foods are disadvantageous for people. One of them is that it has lack of nutrition so that it does not provide any required nourishment to the body. Also, fast foods are the major cause of so many dangerous diseases such as obesity, cardiovascular and diabetes. For instance, around one-third of the population of United States of America is suffering from obesity disease and spending so much money on their treatments because obesity may be a reason for death also. Probing further, eating outside, generally fast food, can affect your family cohesiveness as eating together on dining table allows parents to talk and discuss with their children in the peaceful environment.
On the flip side, some people claim that junk food is the suitable and rapid way to feed stomach in extremely busy daily life. Also, these food are cheaper than other food product and easily available at everywhere any time of the day. In addition, there are numerous kinds of junk food available and the taste is often good.
In conclusion, having junk food outside is not a good habit for healthy life. In my point of view, you cannot be prohibited to sell this but people should aware of the negative effect of this because it indirectly affects human life in term of health, money and socially as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...cause obesity may be a reason for death also. Probing further, eating outside, gener...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...ach in extremely busy daily life. Also, these food are cheaper than other food product and...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e is not a good habit for healthy life. In my point of view, you cannot be prohibi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, third, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83388704319 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60922796074 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5209944255 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235768932212 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734549248053 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530336301825 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134372582361 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034619123499 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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