International travel and tourism makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem
Travelling internationally makes people have a dislike or disrespect for a particular culture rather than making them more unorthodox. There is plethora of drawbacks of tourism such as pollution, cultural disrespect, though with some proper measures these can be avoided without any hassle.
Tourism is the main factor in any country's economic growth as not only it brings influx of tourists but also makes a region famous for its monuments, historical buildings and handicrafts. But there are some abysmal impacts associated with it because tourism requires a lot of transportation facility which leads to the contribution in green house gases and global warming. Inevitably, teenagers and adolescence of that place get highly allured by the culture of the foreigners, therefore leaving their own customs and traditions and adapting the international one.
To cope with these unpropitious practices, government should take some bold initiatives such as they should limit the use of transport and should foster the local Eco-friendly transport, namely, elephant ride or horse ride so that both environment and local economy are in harmony. Concurrently, travelers who throw garbage on the streets or disrespect a culture, for instance, by taking their shoes inside a temple should be taken heavy-handedly albeit they are tourists.
In conclusion, international travel is essential and efficient for any country economic growth. Yet, local culture should be promoted as tourists generally visit a region to witness the unique culture of a country. Eventually, there are some disadvantages of tourism that can be handled easily if proper guidance and instructions are delivered to the locals as well as to the travelers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the locals as well as to the travelers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50566037736 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09478597793 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.471022271 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.9 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170437705521 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705064401005 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579173626348 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109510136696 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696343683203 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.1260098522 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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