Today's generation loves to go shopping especially during the weekend. Shopping becomes a hobby for some people and they love to go to large shopping malls. It is true that large shopping malls are replacing small shops in metro cities. In my opinion, it is good as well as a bad thing. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss it in detail.
Firstly, let's talk about good things about shopping malls. First good thing is that multiple options are available under one roof so that people can compare and buy as per requirement and as per their budget. Another thing is that these shopping malls become a good hangout place for the young generation. Generally, shopping malls are air-conditioned so shopping becomes a pleasure in hot countries like India, UAE, Singapore and other Asian countries, so people prefer to go for shopping in malls instead of small shops.
However, prices are a little bit high as compare to small shops because of the high maintenance cost of large malls. Also due to fewer competition prices are high in malls. Due to large air conditioning plants installed in malls, our environment is also getting impacted.
To conclude, I can say that large shopping malls have some benefits as well as some drawbacks. It is also true that small shops are getting shut day by day due to fewer people prefer to go to these shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...f small shops. However, prices are a little bit high as compare to small shops because ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e high maintenance cost of large malls. Also due to fewer competition prices are hig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so, well, another thing, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57587043177 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508547008547 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9002164497 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1428571429 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241694193548 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923932527441 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727027633485 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153022367881 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623604213327 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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