In less developed countries, are the disadvantages from tourism as great as the advantages??
The topic of tourism in the less developed countries has become a heated debate among societies. Although many people assert that tourism will be fruitful for the country's economy, the others refute this proposal by saying that it will create more problems for the country. This essay will discuss why tourism is beneficial for underdeveloped countries and reach a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of arguments which found out why tourism is a precursor for prosperity in underdeveloped countries in which the most preponderant one will be that it will boost countries economy. Many people will set up small businesses around the visiting places as well as the government will open small and big markets to cater to tourists needs. For instance, a study revealed that the country like Pakistan has boosted its economy by 3% last year just by allowing people around the world to visit. Hence, tourism is directly proportional to the increase in the economy.
Another pivotal aspect of this trend would be that tourism will also excel people knowledge about different cultures and norms. People from different backgrounds meet and learn different values. For example, a survey revealed that about 80% of people worldwide are getting knowledge by tourism. Apparently, tourism helps people to learn heritage and traditional values.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the positives of tourism in terms of enhancing underdeveloped countries economy and learning knowledge. Therefore, in my opinion, governments of underdeveloped countries should take some serious actions to increase tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46370967742 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84564025209 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1850412227 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121602774337 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569981820834 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478223864406 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793847804207 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313238456301 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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