Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to.
Various individuals feel that accomplished people are influence by the place where they grew up. In my own opinion, this phenomenon is not true for the reason that it depends on the person of what factors really drive him to be successful and not necessarily on his local region. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reason.
To begin with, people usually lived by the values they inherited and learned from their childhood environment. Yet it would still matter on the person’s attitude towards attaining success in life. To illustrate, a fully determined individual who is aiming to reach higher position in a company will come true if he persist with his goal. Hence, one cannot absolutely tell that any person can be influenced by the district he belongs to but to his appropriate character and mindset to be triumphant in life.
Apart from this, the fact that human being has always the means to acquire favorable outcome no matter where the surrounding he stays in. This sounds true for several famous personalities who had strive hard enough to be successful. For example, celebrities that came from their own provinces and able to move in the city for work opportunities attain their spotlight in the movie scene, become instantly popular and experience well-off living.
To recapitulate, people are generally successful not because of the place they once lived in but due to their appropriate personalities and attitudes that lead to them to attain the much treasured success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'persists'.
Suggestion: persists
...ition in a company will come true if he persist with his goal. Hence, one cannot absolu...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'strived', 'striven'.
Suggestion: strived; striven
...or several famous personalities who had strive hard enough to be successful. For examp...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'strived', 'striven'.
Suggestion: strived; striven
...or several famous personalities who had strive hard enough to be successful. For examp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, still, well, apart from, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1124497992 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85613048213 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630522088353 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5613566315 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165374284488 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600772820276 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610756721015 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104781392457 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670312884698 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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