Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.'Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
In this days, for many people, leaving home and family in earlier ages to a distant city, considered as a great time for education or work. Although, this notion accepted a good chance by a large number of people, in the opposite idea some people believe this decision may have the disadvantage for them. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss both sides.
To begin with, there are various advantages or backward with leaving home in early age. On the one hand, study or work in another city away from family, particularly in the advanced city, this could bring the best job opportunities or study with better facilities for them. For example, my cousin went to London for education when he was 16 years old. After 5 years he was a well-educated young man and now is working in an international company.
On the other hand, although the young people become self-confident and independent by living away from their parent, this may have a mental injury for them. Because teenagers are in the sensitive age and without the parental care they may get damage from the environment. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers shows that many of teens that lived alone in a far city have been involved in mental diseases, drugs or even crimes.
In conclusion, there are several compelling reasons to agree with sending young people to another city for study or work. My personal belief is that benefits of education or employment in a big city in the early age are outweighed of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83018867925 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67511241167 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6826142071 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31561060344 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116372195795 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720556492022 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190004110218 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04129943437 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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