In the last hundred years, the world has seen many great inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. People's opinions differ as to whether or not computer technology is the greatest among them. While there are some strong arguments against the invent of computer technology, I firmly believe that the technology is the greatest compared to medicine and science. This essay will discuss the reasons why I consider the computer as a most important technology in the past 100 years.
There are several reasons why computer technology is the most significant inventions. Firstly, it has transformed the way we work and communicate. Computers together with Artificial Intelligence made human's work easier as it can be programmed to perform some complex and repetitive work. For example, Exxon uses computers to perform some complex oil drilling work in their workplace. Thus, computers accomplish difficult work and make our job easier.
In addition to making complex work easy, invent of the computer technology offers fast and easy communication. People can connect with their friends and relatives anywhere in the world with the use of computer technology without any issues. For instance, I can connect to my friend in the other corner of the world by using the computers. In spite of the above arguments, some people might promulgate the idea that medicine and science are comparatively better than computers. However, computer advancement can be used in medicine as well as in science.
In conclusion, computers make humans jobs easier by performing complex tasks and helping in communication. In my opinion, computer technology is most beneficial than science and medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
... and computers. Peoples opinions differ as to whether or not computer technology is the greatest amo...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...there are some strong arguments against the invent of computer technology, I firmly believ...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...al Intelligence made humans work easier as it can be programmed to perform some co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4022556391 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9263313409 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1290969238 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2103020298 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782561124228 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100697340265 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146494109244 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153081780143 0.0609392437508 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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