It is irrefutable fact that personal development is a key element for career development and progress in the job. I personally believe with the statement and this essay will elaborate two main reasons in further paragraphs with a logical conclusion.
To begin with, personal development helps people to develop the vision in each area. People with standard personal development will choose right way in the workplace, which makes their work notable. Such development not only ensures the right vision towards life and career but also enhance the possibilities of promotion with mouth-watering salary. Hence, it is needless to say the personal development is the base factor of developing the professional career.
In another hand, people with low personal development will fail to perform in the workplace due to the several reasons. Firstly, they are unable to have the commanding power of team and people will not obey them. This will lead people towards the dire consequences. Secondly, such people will be a character of joke and face bully in the workplace. For instance, a survey done by Sydney University shows that 75% people who are pray to bully have defect personalities.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the importance of personal development in professional development and improving careers. Thus, I believe without personalities people will be unable to perform well in life and workplace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36771300448 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00617046588 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556053811659 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5226619017 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0769230769 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260992653462 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118409563027 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121540022254 0.071462118173 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185062834726 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850279632691 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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