Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one’s career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by nav12345 on Mon, 05/21/2018 - 00:11

Personal development enhance the quality of life in many ways that contribute towards the advancement of career. These days there is an ongoing debate between the people who think that professional development can be achieved by personal development. In this essay, I shall be discussing my point of view by analyzing the argument.

At the outset, myriad of benefits can be attributed to career advancing as today in modern era, people are working hard to achieve their goals by developing various skills, such as leadership skills and other interpersonal skills. These skills differs the person from other people who came for job interview or entrance exam. For instance, there are some companies who differ students based on these skills in case their marks are equal. Moreover, confidence also result in students overall outlook due to leadership qualities that helps to conduct seminars boldly in a large crowd.

Another justification to this argument is that these days, universities are also providing various courses to enhance skills, so that it can help candidates to perform better in his or her career.

in conclusion, development of an individual is an important factor in his or her life as it contribute to overall growth of the society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'differ'.
Suggestion: differ
...ther interpersonal skills. These skills differs the person from other people who came f...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...erform better in his or her career. in conclusion, development of an individua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2118226601 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84948012703 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4282774829 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.555555556 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180727256736 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075994269108 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663289872969 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100742125945 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644416736624 0.0609392437508 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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