Polygomy has increased widely in this modern and brutal life? How far do you agree with this statement.
Polygamy becomes popular culture today in many countries and more and more people diverted to this trend. As per my opinion, because of low education rate and hard life in some of the countries, population of polygamy community increased significantly. This essay discuss about reason for increase in polygamy practice with relative examples.
Firstly, many African an Asian countries today are suffering from food shortage, unemployment and illiteracy. Hence, people of these countries blindly follow ancient traditions of polygamy without thinking of outcomes. For instance, some religion like Islam permits polygamy practices and so in most of the Muslim countries, many people have more than one life partners. Thus, religion and traditions play vital role to increase polygamy practice.
Secondly, in many rich and modern society, men and women have freedom to have multiple partner at the same time. Such practice is seen as a status of symbol in these societies. For instance. in western world, many people live with multiple partners with mutual agreement. Hence, sometimes money, status and culture influence people to choose polygamy.
In conclusion, there are many factors like culture, religion, economical situation and upbringing influenced polygamy and today we can see more and more males and females diverted to this path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54854368932 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66356263951 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0667570422 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113967136836 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407976808671 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457077926675 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734457431188 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050078168569 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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