Schools should prepare students for university, rather than for work. How far do you agree with this statement?
Today, academic education for children and teenager is paramount for achieving success in one's life. Many people believe that academic education prepares the student only to pursue higher education in university and does not provide them with necessary job skills which are in demand to earn income. This essay will discuss the importance of teaching job skills for the students.
Today a child starts attending school from the age of three and passes his high school at the age of 17.During these years children are taught lots of theoretical subjects like language, math, science and social studies. After studying these subjects, the student will only have gained knowledge which helps him in appears for exams to get admission in university. I have seen many people pursuing higher education to get an admission in university where they teach the students job specific skills. Once, they graduate from university many student get high paying jobs. Perhaps, school should prepare students for universities.
Many people are of the opinion that school should prepare the students with job skills. They say that if this helps students to find jobs and support their family in case they are unable to pursue higher education. The university fees are so high that many people cannot afford the fees. I have seen my neighbor working with his father and brother to support his family since they were not well-off. Hence, when school teaches students job skills, they will be able to support their families. These skills also come handily for part-time students in paying their college fees themselves.
This essay discussed how beneficial it can prove to the student if they are taught job skills in school. They will be self-dependent to finance their education and also support the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16438356164 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41573118904 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517123287671 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6947865883 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235288063888 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967694581803 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876275520579 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150477462136 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307119623054 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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