The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Write between 200 and 300 words
Education and knowledge are significant part of our lives to resolve any problem or find out work around which also plays vital role to control the population across the worldwide. I certainly believe that education can help us to overcome the population problem and spread the awareness that our planet is really struggling with the serious issues caused by overpopulation and this is high time control it and save our planet. This essay will discuss how education can help us to convince people to birth-control and side effect caused to planet by increasing population.
Firstly, especially in rural areas, Education and ample knowledge required to convince people to have only one kid or two kids whether it’s a girl or a boy. Let them know that girls are not less than boys in any sense and to balance nature life cycle both girl and boy are equally important. For example: China has a policy to have only one children to control their population and even it's predicted by 2050 China will decline the population.
Secondly, People should be educated that increasing population causing serious effect to mother nature as more population required more resources to consume and places to live and which also means more pollution. This is causing more deforestation to build houses and exploiting the natural resources. Overpopulation responsible for climate change, global warming and many other chaos and catastrophic events. For instance: Due to global warming, Antarctica's glacial is melting fast and effecting marine life.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that education can bring the sensitivity in people towards girl and boys ratio and people will become more sensible to their planet and mother nature and eventually it will solve the overpopulation problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one child', 'a child', or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: one child; a child; children
...xample: China has a policy to have only one children to control their population and even it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26643598616 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78979010756 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5816724654 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914891294247 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362551599266 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374855380685 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552215854461 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369271840066 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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