In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific examples and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Sherrysh on Mon, 09/10/2018 - 09:43

The debate whether or over the issue of shooting is an old one , with the attitude of people shifting throughout the debate over years . Proponents and opponents make their cases to endorse their views on this contagious issue. In this essay , i will elaborate both the cases and then draw a conclusion. In my opinion , the onus should be on the government.

There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpoint that in which one is that holding guns at home enhances the plight of shooting because people with their work load, busy schedule and excessive duties remains obsessed and loosing their virility . For example, US government allowed the citizens to have guns for their security purposes but it also raises the risk of unnecessary shooting. I am completely concur with the opinion not to keep guns at home because it could danger the life of a person with no involvement.To elaborate further , few pertinent examples could be taken into consideration that government should provide the licence after ensuing hard terms and conditions.

On the other side of the fence , critics also believed that one can keep guns only for the purpose of security not for to harm others . They also highlighted that if person use it for illegal purpose should be punished with stern rules and must be assaulted. The other school of thoughts is either it should be regulated or banned for the prosperous nation.

In the light of above discussion , it is fair and justifiable to say that there are compelling arguments on the both sides . I must say disadvantage of keeping guns outweighs its advantages.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97752808989 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73056430819 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9285056337 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103585337354 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307360552846 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395408435772 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533898780878 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05730039 0.0609392437508 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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