Nowadays, many countries are on a spending spree for gathering possible information about the outer space. The race started back in the mid 20th Century with the US launching the first mission and at present most of the countries are in race to lead the exploration. However, there are people who assert with it, whereas some think of it as waste. The essay will deal with both the aspects.
On the one side, a large number of investments are being made on the whimsical ideas of exploring the other options outside of Earth in case, the need arises. There are common beliefs that there is an impending danger to earth from the other places in the universe. In order to safeguard the interests of all the people, the investments are being made to gather all possible information. Numerous expeditions are being carried out to learn about various things. For instance, India recently launched a Mars Mission to learn about the survival of humans on Mars as the ozone layer of earth is depleting. Thus, many believe that the research should go on for the betterment of humanity.
On the other side, there are many organizations which feel that the money is being wasted to achieve the things which are not even the need of the hour. There are many burning priorities across the whole words which need urgent attention and the governments are involving themselves in a race which will lead humanity on verge of another crisis. There are many problems that the humanity is facing and no research is being done to rectify those problems. Therefore, the governments should invest on things of urgent requirements and not other issues.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I feel that the governments should focus on resolving the ongoing problems and not recklessly invest money on things which are not even necessary. But with the problems looming it is not a good option to blast off rockets under the garb of exploration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... both the aspects. On the one side, a large number of investments are being made on the whims...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ed urgent attention and the governments are involving themselves in a race which will lead hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.5418719212 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 329.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84802431611 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57268215508 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498480243161 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8965459031 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6875 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17663446856 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493431454934 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298462382405 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085081931803 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411090694465 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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