In this days, some people think, education should create future skilled workers and proper members of society. the other people believe education could fulfill people's life. The better workforces and best society members can be the aim of education. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some advantages of education.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support education to create workforce and good members of society. Although the new graduated workers have not enough practical experience to start their job, they gained all the knowledge of their expertise. they can get many experiences after a time working as an apprentice. For example, when I started my job, I had not any experience, I passed some practical classes and workshops to relate more to my position.
In addition, the earning of educated people is not very high like businessmen, but they can be positive people in any community. During education, they learn to be influential to develop the society without crimes. For instance, a recent research conducted by NSE University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of crimes done by the people who they were not educated or have not been the educated parents.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the advantages of education, in my personal viewpoint, although education maybe does not brings high income with itself, it can prepare the best workforces and succeeded people to build a developed community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76628699704 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0941391115 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33815955029 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129316219275 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129481474406 0.071462118173 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201591909825 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140694841331 0.0609392437508 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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