Some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss.
Higher education is an essential part of every pupil’s life. This not only makes them good citizens but also enables them to get a good job. Especially, studying in universities and colleges help every student to learn the essential values of life. Higher education makes them capable to get jobs in various companies. In my opinion, higher education has a high aim to enable students to get jobs.
Higher education not only provide a certain degree to a student but also teach them distinguishes enabling skills. These skills make them get good jobs in multi national companies and to acquire a respectful place in the world. Moreover, certain kinds of skills are required to get the job, which cannot learn, just by getting degrees. Colleges help pupils to learn these skills so that when students sit for interview, they have more chances to get jobs.
In addition to this, higher education provides opportunity to different people to promote. Some companies required their employees to get higher level of education in order to get promotion. This will not only increase their level of job but also raise their standard in society. It has observed in recent researches that people who have higher education; they have more chances to succeed in their life.
In the end, it can be concluded that higher education provides opportunity to individuals to achieve a respectful place in the society while helping them to get the good job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03734439834 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61879314044 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50622406639 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9422095059 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14174886333 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633190788479 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513067202595 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914540486747 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410219135226 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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