It is irrefutable fact, that education helps in physical, social, mental and spiritual development of an individual. Some mortals considered home education is best however, i personally believe that schools play a imperative role in student life.
There are multifarious reasons regarding home education. Firstly, home schooling helps children to obstain from thr grave evil of falling into bad company of notorious pupils and from any violence. For instance a survey conducted by the education department showed that 60% individuals indulge themselves into a illegal activities just from the influence of their peer group in schools. Secondly, at home student get personal attention from parents. Because, they keep eye on each and every activity of their child. Due that their relationship with their child's become strong. Moreover as a parents, they aware about the weakness of their infants and motivate them in every situation, provide a tranquil environment, so that they can better concentrated on their studies.
On the other hand, the role of schooling in student life is evident. Because, it provide the civilize environment for toddlers. They interact many other students daily just like him in schools and become extrovert. In addition, children learn new skills, traits and etiquettes in academic session which is helpful to infuse moral values like sharing, teamwork, discipline and so on. Furthermore, due to extra curriculum activities in school, sense of competition increase among teenagers. For example, school organised many inter school competitions , for boost up the confidence, sense of rivalary and infact teachers inspire them to give some extra efforts to improve their performance as well.
In conclusion, there have been ongoing debate's whether home schooling is significant or school education. But, according to me academic education is best for the holistic development of toddlers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59726962457 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88527613284 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631399317406 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2414929362 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4705882353 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217462484436 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654359820496 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414271776109 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133088239109 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031674527175 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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