Some People think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
In the competitive world laws play a vital role in our life which is laid by government to maintain peace and harmony in the country or nation. Some people think that the laws prove to be very essential for our life, but some people have contrary views. For me, this statement is feasible that laws are requisite in 20th century.
To commence with, as we all know that laws have been made since immemorial. Without laws, we can imagine real world in discipline. Basically, we say people will feel fear while doing erroneous task. For instance, in Arab Country, Dubai, laws are very hard and stern, and everyone knows about the punishment while breaking laws. Hence, crime rate is very less.
Furthermore, take traffic rules for instance, fined are levied for jumping red signals and traffic violation. Punishments like imprisonment, life sentence, death sentence etc are made so that it acts as deterrent for not indulging in illegal activities. Hence people due to fear of these punishments abstain from activities that may disturb the laws in the society.
To recapitulate the foregoing taught propounds the view that, laws are necessary to survive in competitive era where crime rate is increasing day by day and stringent punishments should be structured and implemented for smooth running of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...or not indulging in illegal activities. Hence people due to fear of these punishments...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09722222222 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68463835428 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7020457918 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15347848181 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553564789235 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701420516107 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874987919672 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646170361231 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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