In this day and age, international travel for students has become a debatable issue among people from all walks of life all around the world. Although travelling to study regarded as thoroughly both positive and constructive by many individuals, there are a number of people hold an opposite view. I am inclined to strongly believe that students travelling internationally are quite beneficial for nations since it promotes intermixing of cultures.
To begin with, there are a number of reasons why I support international journey for students. First and foremost is that it helps in avoiding xenophobia. Secondly, it accelerates globalization. From my personal experience, when I travelled internationally for studies I have witnessed the intermixing of cultures. Consequently, it is quite conspicuous that travelling to study is the need of the century.
However, there is no doubt that student travel can provide individuals with various negative outcomes. Despite this possibility, it is highly claimed that it causes high economic burdens for the students. By way of example, recent academic research conducted by Oxford University researchers in 2012 has shown that homesickness is increasing in international students. Thus, it is quite obvious that international student travel can have some negative consequences too.
To put it in a nutshell, while there are several persuasive arguments on both sides, I am of the opinion that international travel for students is a good concept.
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- Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31877855774 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.79217539 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277094956535 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973185781127 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817935980658 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170468809089 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598869700359 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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