It is recommended from experts to remain students in school until eighteen years old. Although this opinion considered as thoroughly positive and constructive among public all around the world, there are a number of people hold an opposing viewpoint. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this recommendation.
To begin with, there are various reason why students should stay in school until the age of eighteen. First and foremost, while the disadvantage of this idea is wasting the time, its benefit is more preparation for university. For example, there are many basic lessons such as mathematics and English language, which are the base of many sciences, and also learning them in school help students at the university.
In addition, Although some of the studies in school do not have any advantage in life, some of them help the students to choose the right way to continue the education. For instance, the lessons in the field of computer and art have many advantages to living and they can attract the interest of students to themselves for study in university as well.
In conclusion, While there are several compelling arguments on this statement, my personal sentiment is that the benefits of this requirement are far outweighed of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04225352113 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81924784901 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2850951208 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221183677528 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100590420088 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100860531137 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122448037764 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542078107262 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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