Team sports have become an interesting subject for mass media because of the debate it can spark. There are some who feel that they are not good because of the antisocial behaviors it can cause during and after the matches. However, I feel that there are many advantages which can outweigh disadvantages. In following paragraphs, I would discuss my viewpoints on this subject.
To start with, sports make us healthier and stronger not only mentally but also physically. Team sports have further special benefits related to it. Firstly, an individual will have to play with a team which can teach them to become social and outwards. Secondly, it can build team spirits amongst them which is very important for community building. Finally, it can bring a person out of his comfort zone.
From the perspective of the society, sports like the soccer and the cricket bring people close especially during the international matches. Spectators from all over the world come together forgetting their anger and sorrows. Such behavior brings one kind of patriotism amongst the citizen of the one country.
However, this patriotism can bring antisocial behavior with them and can create a pressure for the players. For instance, sometimes supporters of a team mock the members and supporters of the rival team. If this behavior inculcated in youngsters, it can take the dangerous foam if not stopped by parents and peers.
To wrap up, team sports have more benefits than drawbacks. Although they can cause antisocial behavior, it can be handled by strict rules and regulations and players can also ask their fans to respect rival teams as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0962962963 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65248285478 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0249518086 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9411764706 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162396366287 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567311182316 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472329351241 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961479489669 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178699906528 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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