Recently, the phenomenon of many problems for today's governments and international organizations, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that over-population cannot be the most pressing problem, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number o individuals. I am inclined to believe that financial problems can be pressure, and I will analyze throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree that governments are facing different problems in these days. At first, the growing population could fulfill the needs of young workers, However, crowded population brings many issues for governments. For example, environmental problems such as more fuel consumption as well as further greenhouse gas emission and food supplying for more people are the most important problems in the modern age.
In addition, International organizations can help governments to solve many of governmental problems. But, the lake of resources made financial difficulties for governments to pay for organizations' services. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2018 has shown that a significant number of international organizations have become bankrupt due to bad economic situations.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the lake of resources and over-population are more pressing issues today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88837209302 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42888818748 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5612832582 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253023203777 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103058782205 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634300880878 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141358445139 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845662840383 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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