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In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss your opinion and give example.
The importance of tourism for a country, which has been always debated, has now become more controversial. It can be agreed that developed countries have more tourism advantages than others. This essay will elaborate on tourism in both developed and underdeveloped countries, to evidence that tourism in underdeveloped countries is advantageous.
Firstly, there are numerous reason why underdeveloped countries have disadvantages of tourism, but most obvious fact is that tourist don’t prefer to visit those countries. There are particular reasons such as lack of security, pollution, and facilities. For instance, Pakistan and Afghanistan are mainly underdeveloped countries which are facing terrorism, many health issues and etc. Thus, development has dramatic effects on a country’s tourism business. There are some countries who make 30% of their income from just tourism.
On the contrary, the people from those countries think that they are getting plenty of tourism even though their countries are underdeveloped. They might be right but tourists only come from underdeveloped country. For example, Afghanistan people go to Pakistan for holidays and vice versa. As research shows that there are very less number of tourist come in a year to Pakistan than India and Nepal. So, underdeveloped countries get benefits from tourist business but not as much as developed.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that underdeveloped countries have less tourist and they won’t be able to get more advantages from tourist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
...ortance of tourism for a country, which has been always debated, has now become more controvers...
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Line 4, column 382, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...re facing terrorism, many health issues and etc. Thus, development has dramatic effects ...
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Line 6, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le to get more advantages from tourist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.625 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18856255268 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1262294884 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179564542843 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694011701492 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104799136032 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116934429433 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115461022223 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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